No complaints here. solid riffing, creative drums, great mix and a heavy guitar sound.
The only thing i'd recomend is a little bit of lead work over it. Nothing show-offy, but maybe a little lead line to add another dimension.
Of course, that's only a reccomendation based on personal taste. you're doing what you're doing extremely well, and there's nothing wrong with what you have already.
You get 5.
Thanks dude! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm working on 2 more in the vein of this one!
Nice, in a very disturbing way.
Has a good effect. the dissonance and randomness of the chords gives a good lost feeling. would go great in a flash movie.
I liked this a lot man, gave a really haunting feel. The melodic guitar line going for most of the song was great and flowed very nicelyu over the rhythm track. My favorite though was the ending chords you played. Very discordant, but still melodic with the rest of the song. The only thing id change is instread of a fade-in, an actual intro. And, you know, some high growling over it. That would be nice as shit.
coolness glad you liked it. this was just a few riffs i had workin so it wasnt supposed to be a whole song. id like to use them though. if i did then they would definitely have a proper intro
I keep waiting fo rthe crecendo man! Its a perfect into. The beginning sounded a bit muddy, but thats probably just the MIDI. Fucking nice dude.
Yeah, I had to export the MIDI from Guitar Pro then convert it into an MP3, I don't really have the proper equipment to record the RSE (Real Sound Engine) of it.
Could use some work
It had soe good parts and some bad parts, but overall, not a bad song. I liked the drums. The clarinet threw me off when it came in, but over the guitar it actually fit, which suprised me. All in all, i think it was a good tune, especially the end. Had a good driving sound. I'd just change how it comes in at first because its such a quick transition from minor to major, it throws me off. Other than that, nice tune.
I like this a lot man, the piano was good stuff, and the melody playing throughout on the synth lead made me smile. It had a really... busy feel. It sounded like somthing that could be played while some shit was getting done. Nice work.
Thanks a lot!
I'm glad this could put you in a good mood..
That let's me know I did my job right!
I liked it. It had a nice eastern feel to it. The bassline sounds very processed compared to the organic sound of the other instruments. other than that, this was some nice work. Very realxing.
many thanks yea im far from done with this
I really liked the clean intro, had a kind of middle east thing going on. The riffs themselves were good too, and the diminished 5ths were a nice touch. The solo ripped as well. All the makings of a tight metal song. All you need is some brutal growls and this baby's set for moshing.
Thanks for the comments.
I agree, all this tune needs is some vocal action, and thanks to Cyril I now have lyrics.
Expect to see the finished version of this baby in a few weeks.
Diggin it broseph. the fucked up intros nice. Good black metal.
coolness keep it metal and fuck posers
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